Hi, I'm Alysa. And this is my first blog post ever:
I only started to love to write once my AP english literature teacher broke me down and told me how poor my writing truly was. My weakness was never really that my writing said nothing; rather, I expressed my ideas in too many words and with too many details. "Flowery writing" is what he called it--trying to make writing sound as pretty and lovely, "as flowers" by coating it with heavy description. As he painfully tore my writing style apart, I found myself in Starbucks for endless hours either trying to work on my own writing habits or reading the literature of authors who have already mastered their own style. Although I rarely found his workload easy and light, he is now my favorite teacher because of the tough way he helped me discover the power and beauty of literature, writing and coffee.
My blog, therefore, is centered around this dark, caffeinated beverage that helped inspire me and my development as a writer. Once I really began writing and reading for the class, it became my escape from the suffocating environment I was in. I grew up in an extremely small Jewish community in Atlanta, in which my private Jewish high school had two hallways and 96 kids. By senior year, Starbucks became a private, personal space outside my house and community to breathe and think and eventually write. I may be a crazy coffee addict now (proven by my blog's name including the beverage drank while writing it,) but at least I have gained more from it than a caffeine buzz.
Hey Alysa,
ReplyDeleteI commend you for sharing a personal anecdote with other bloggers. I know, too, from experience that criticism can make an individual reevaluate their writing style. Unlike your other English teacher from the past though, I believe that Carolyn will provide feedback and criticism in a less harsh way.
I also like that you based this autobiography on starbucks coffee; it is so cool that you incorporated an interest of yours throughout this assignment.
Hope to meet you during the semester!
Best,
Mark
Hi, Aliza! Thanks for sharing your story -- I enjoy hearing about students' previous experiences with English/Lit and the teachers who inspired them (even if they delivered some "tough love"). I think my teaching/editing style is to be sensitive to others' feelings, while still being honest. I'm also in favor of each individual allowing their personal style shine through, while still being an effective writer. "Effective" will be a key work this term, I think. What I mean by it is, are we getting across what we want to get across, in the appropriate way for our audience? I like the way you expressed yourself in this blog (your first! congrats!) and I look forward to reading more.
ReplyDeleteAlso -- nice color choice! Starbucks all the way!
Hey Alysa!
ReplyDeleteI thought it was quite creative of how you explained how your writing experience transformed. To be able to take in harsh criticism from a teacher is hard. But I respect the fact that you took the time and made sure to improve your writing style.
It must have been a huge change from going from a small school to such a big campus like College Park.
I'm sure that you will do well this semester!
- Jason
Hey Alysa! Your writing experience is very unique and I really enjoyed reading about it! I also love how you included starbucks (yum)! I look forward to meeting you at some point in class! I'm sure you will do great in ENGL101 this semester!
ReplyDeleteSounds awesome. I'm not so big on coffee. How do you feel about soda? Hot chocolate?
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