Circumcision is a unique practice because of its different forms and meanings to numerous diverse demographics. In modern times, most people recognize its medical benefits for males and do not consider it more than a hygienic practice. However, being a modern-orthodox Jew, I personally have witnessed the traditional roots and ritualistic significance of it. On the eighth day after his birth, my younger brother was circumcised in my synagogue with the whole community joined together watching. The removal of the foreskin is celebrated in Judaism, because it symbolizes a male officially joining the Jewish tradition by accepting G-d like the way our ancestor Abraham did. Every Jewish male must be circumcised, even those that convert later on in life.
The importance of circumcision in a religious context is not exclusive to Judaism; many other religions sects, even African tribes, find significance in its practice and symbolism. One major point of difference, however, involves gender because both men and female forms of circumcision exist. While male circumcision—the removal of the foreskin—has been proven to be medically beneficial, female circumcision—the removal of the clitoris and possible appendage of the vagina—has been shown to be an extremely painful experience that actually hurts the woman. Therefore, most educated religions and nations do not practice it but advocate against it, even by renaming it “genital mutilation.” Yet, female circumcision is still practiced in certain places for tradition’s sake and for its results, including stunting female’s sexual desires.
Hey Alysa,
ReplyDeleteI did not even know there was such a thing as female circumcision. Though I am not a female (obviously), I believe that it would be extremely painful to have part of the female genitalia removed.
I liked the fact that you were very descriptive in your analysis. Though I really like what you wrote, I was a bit confused about what stases you are analyzing.
Best,
Mark
Hey Alysa,
ReplyDeleteI think that the topic of circumcision is very unique. I actually do not know too much about the process, but your explanations were clear and easy to follow.
I believe you hit on both of the stases explaining what circumcision actually is and why there are such processes.
- Jason
By looking at the issue of female circumcision, we can see the importance of reshaping tradition and educating women, which most people don't see; this is important because the health and freedom of women are being comprised due to their inferior status and strict religion.
ReplyDeleteAlysa, I'm glad you were able to choose a topic that relates both to health and to your other interests. I think you will have a lot to draw on in terms of research and commentary on the subject. In response to your post, I recommend making sure you clearly outline the difference between the Jewish practice of male circumcision and the practice of female circumcision in Africa as much "apples to apples" as possible. That is, when you mention male circumcision having medically proven benefits, address the absence of medically proven benefits in female circumcision (rather than focusing just on the pain inflicted... arguably, both practices are painful). Likewise, because this is such a polemic topic, be very careful in terms of your tone when disagreeing with female circumcision -- watch out for phrases like "educated religions and nations," which may negatively impact your ethos as an author... these nations and cultures are not necessarily "less educated" .. or, if they are, in what ways? are they less educated in Western medicine?. That being said, you have chosen a very important topic in terms of human rights and women's rights, and will therefore be entering a very important conversation. Regarding your magic thesis sentence, I think you have a very promising start. It will be important to specify what specific aspect of female circumcision you will be looking at, and what specific kind of education you think it is important to extend to all women (literacy? a sense of their rights?). I think you have a lot to work with before you get to researching, and I look forward to seeing how your ideas develop over the course of the process.
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